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I want to get you out of my head
or at least put these emotions on hold for a while.

But with a face and a soul so beautiful and perfect,
why wouldn't I want to see it when I dream at night?
and every time I close my eyes...

When I wake, I am alone.
and though you’re not so far away,
the little distances feel like forever.

Metres turn to miles,
and miles turn to the circumference of the earth...

Worse still, you leave me only mirrors,
staring into reflections of memories
that have become so bittersweet.

Becoming weaker as the weeks wear on,
days turn into months that feel like years...

Please just give me something to cling to,
and I will, you know I will.
All you leave me is out in the cold,
with nothing left to hope for but regret.

And yet the memory of you remains,
no matter how much I push it away...

No matter how much I want this sun to set,
your light still gets in my eyes.
Like smoke trailing from the embers of my heart...

it blinds me.
©2008-2009 ~Mental-Mishap
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Sigh... can't be bothered to say anything about this right now..
cos if i start i won't be able to stop!

Just like i can't stop thinking of him..
I havn't seen him for so long yet i think of him every single day...
I just wish i could move on... or at least forget about him for while.. until we have a proper chance to be together...
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i really enjoyed the poem. it was very expressive and emotional.

u shouldnt move on or try to forget about him, just accept that you can't be together yet. x
Thanks so much :hug:
and you are right...
its just difficult.. but thanks again :)

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I really like this poem, and know this feeling rather well.

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Thankyou :cuddle:
I'm glad you like it
sorry you can relate tho... its a sucky feeling.. :(

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From where I know this feeling?

Great poem!

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Yah it does.

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:frail:Every artist was first an amateur - 'Ralph Waldo Emerson':frail:
Thanks so much :love:
so glad you enjoyed it
and thanks for the fave :)

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yeah i no, thanks :)
dont worry tho, im over this now, was about someone beginning with m..
but u no, totally over that now, i need to stay away from those youngins!

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